Cranial Abduction


10 of 31

Seized by swords of light
And stabbing daggers of doom,
Another migraine


6 thoughts on “Cranial Abduction

  1. Jaana

    I hope that by the time you read this, swords are no longer stabbing you. I will say a prayer for quick healing!


  2. Paul

    Great haiku — alliteration and assonance. The ‘a’ sound in “stabbing daggers”…well, stabs. Very effective. Feel better, friend! 🙂


  3. Paul, I bet you give the best commentary in student papers–I bet the students even look forward to reading it. Thanks–you see what I didn’t even know was there.😄


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